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Re: Guess Who is Coming to Dinner-(Doc)

Posted: 09 Feb 2016, 13:17
by Dominique
Please note that the part of Lt. Rick Brown and Chief Brick Duvane is written by writer of Dominique.


Rick would have to hand it to the woman in front of him. The smile that appeared like a switch had been hit was eye catching. He took it in and gave it the brief attention it deserved. The reason behind it was based on some momentary amusement on her part. He didn’t have time to dig on why or what was a minor player in the game of who done it only to get sidetracked. He was tired and lacking the answers he needed to allow his *** to head back out on the joyous eve of Christmas.

“Yeah, so I have been told before.” His face was hardly wearing the mirror of her own amusement. He felt that knot and pull within that signaled that times were going to be getting tough for him all over again. Go figure. “And you are the angel of good will that an employer should be grateful to have. No need to call her in. Just give her this.” A business card was easy to pull from his jacket pocket. His fingers pressed it down on the surface of the counter so that his index finger could move to send the corner into a snap for effect. “Let her know I will be answering that number as soon as she calls it.”

Rick pulled out his wallet and set down the crisp notes of currency that would more than cover the two floral arrangements he set on the counter. Essentially he was going to be paying a third more for the holiday bouquets but it was worth it. What the cashier did once he left hardly mattered. The tossing of the business card, forgetting to pass it along or delivering it as asked all could happen.

However, that was hardly as effective as the fact a few seeds of promise had been planted into that blindingly pretty blonde head he was glancing at while his hands continued to move. The message was loud and clear even for her. He was interested more in than the shop or its current employee and he was there for far more than what he would hauling off in his arms into the frigid night air. Wasting no more of his limited time he cradled each arrangement without waiting for the typical protective packaging that would usually be offered up free of charge out of courtesy.

The sweet smell of the blooms beneath his nose saved the night. As he worked his way through the shop he circulated their pleasing scent along the route he had taken from the public restroom he had recently made use of. The glance at the door offered him temporary relief. He needed fresh air. The empty foil wrapper that appeared with his rental car keys was the trigger for the return burn he didn’t need. Once the shop door was open he disappeared when it closed. The lieutenant made double time back to the car and slid in tossing the arrangements next to him on the passenger seat.

“This job is going to kill me.” The words escaped his moving lips with a slow visible cloud of condensation for visible proof.

The car rolled out of the Honeymead parking spot and out onto the street. Next stop would be the convenience store he passed coming in. Once he loaded up on the self-medicating items he over used he would head towards his next stop on the well planned route. It was only a matter of time till he found his answers. He always did.

Re: Guess Who is Coming to Dinner-(Doc)

Posted: 11 Feb 2016, 19:30
by Mortll
Albert sat on the bench mumbling to himself. It was frigid cold and Christmas here he sat freezing his *** off at the park and mourning his misfortunes. Mostly laminating himself for being a moron and how could he **** up everything he touched so badly. He reached for the bottle of liquid warmth that he was currently drowning his miseries in his cold gloved fingers fumbling and spilling a string of curses fell out of his mouth.


He fumbled some more recovering his hard fought for prize as he straightened the sight of two well formed legs caught his eye. Bare legs in this weather lady was going to freeze to death he thought to himself before his eyes continued to travel up their shapely curves to the fur coat that hung to just above her knees. The draperies did not stop his eyes from traveling up her body to her face it was a pleasant face if not a bit pale with crystal blue eyes and hair as dark as the night sky that he had so unfortunately found himself in. What was she just doing standing out here in the park on Christmas? The silence just hung in the air as if it was going to strangle the night then she spoke “ Want some company?” ahhhh he thought to himself ‘Hooker’ well she was out of luck His last penny was spent on the bottle he was cradling in the crook of his arm like a well cared for baby and His slut of a wife had stolen all she could of his meager paycheck before tossing him out on his ear on Christmas. He took a sip out of his baby and his words came out slurred “I ain't got no money honey but if you wanna share a bench you're welcome “ he gestured to the empty part of the bench.



His eyebrows raised as the lady took a seat. He had figured she would bugger off after he said he didn't have any money and who wanted to spend their Christmas sitting on a cold park bench with a drunk loser. Another long silence filled the air as Albert struggled with trying to find something to say. He suddenly felt a lot more sober “I uhhh Nice weather huh?” and as if on cue large fluffy snowflakes started to descend from the sky in a light bobbing pattern that danced through the night air, the dim park lights illuminated their slow dance. A nervous laugh escaped Alberts lips as he turned his gaze back to the lady to find her closer on the park bench.



She just smiled at him and he suddenly felt like the bench wasn't big enough. “I uh I'm uh i'm married.” he sputtered out as if that statement would magically make the woman go away.

“Relax” her dark red lips said as long fingers reached out touching his shoulder.He jumped a bit but stayed put on the bench. She was so close he felt the breath of the words on his ear as those same fingers slipped up the back of his neck into his hair. He shivered it had nothing to do with the cold. It was the disconcerting fear that something bad had found him.




The Joggers went by with just a glance at the couple on the bench There cradled together like lovers enjoying the lights on the lake on a cold winter's night. Mortlls head was buried in curve of the man's neck. A soft strangled moan escaped his lips and the stench of urine came from him as his bladder involuntarily evacuated . To any onlookers from a distance they appeared nothing more than a couple in a lovers embrace. Her tongue slid along the taunt skin covering the man's collar bone collecting the trickle of blood that had escaped her feeding another moan escaped him as her the sharp teeth slowly sunk into his flesh once again this time it was almost as if he had missed her kiss.


The annoying buzz broke the spell that had fallen on the moment. It sounded angry in the night and Mortll sought to quickly silence it before the man came to while she was still there. She did not feel like hauling a body down to the lake though judging from this Miserable Sots condition that they would judge it an accident or suicide. She saw the number and only spoke one word “Hold “ before she finished cleaning up her handy work of the man's neck a quick examination the wound was healing and no blood was left Mortll grabbed the half empty bottle of booze and cradled it back into his arm and carefully pulled his coat back around his neck. With a pat on his shoulder she turned the way she had came with a little vigor in her step. “Mortll here Jane this better be good.”

Mortll listened carefully as her ditzy blonde rattled on about her encounter with the Cop that had called Mortll by her name Mortlls eyes narrowed Sure she had a public persona and that would be the name any Cop would know her by but she had not had any type of trouble for the cops to question her about she made certain her public persona was squeaky clean and a downright goody2shoes in the community. Mortll frowned as her assistant came to the end of her story “Ok ok give me the number I’ll talk to you later Jane just make sure the power stays on there if i lose my flowers Jane i can think of other things that i don't need . The woman on the other end quickly hung up the phone and Mortlls fingers punched out the number she had rattled out .



The phone did it's annoying ringing thing on the other end as Mortll entered the garage of West towers. If Detective Rick Brown wanted to speak to her he damn well better answer his phone she sure as hell wasn't going to spend her time tracking him down. One ringy dingy two ringy dingies her mind was doing its best Lily Tomlin Impersonation If he didn't answer soon **** him it was Christmas she was going to find a good friend and celebrate.